Last Namaz!

“Please don’t be late, beta!”, Fatima tells her son Kashim, who is busy eating his favorite ‘haleem’. He loves haleem and she knew it. The preparation is special today to celebrate Kashim’s sixteenth birthday. His father brought him a kurta-pyjama on his last birthday before he was vanished. No one knew where is he. Kashim is all what Fatima has apart from a goat, they him Chotu.

Kashim gets up, careful of the haleem stains, not to spoil his favorite dress and a deep-rooted memory of his father. Kashim and his father, always used to go for Friday’s namaz together, along with Abdul, but those days are gone! He taps Chotu’s head and jumps out of the door. Fatima stands there as they both step towards the turn of the lane. She smiles and returns to pick up the dishes.

Allah wasn’t kind with Abdul and took away his eyesight when he was two years old but he is as talented as anyone in the village. Abdul loved this special fruit ‘antera’ and that’s one more reason why they were best friends.

After washing dishes, Fatima turns the radio on and the news of minister’s visits makes her wonder, although she has no hopes. The next news of killing of two young militants, although a regular one, stops her for a minute, and then she moves towards the kitchen to prepare for the dinner.

She did not know that tonight she did not have to make it for two.

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4 thoughts on “Last Namaz!

  1. Prashant July 2, 2012 at 3:02 pm Reply

    The truest of emotions are sometimes curtailed by the worldly desires and responsibilities…the happiness and pain do slowly take the veil up…Wonderful writing khalid !

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  2. Khalid Raza July 4, 2012 at 11:09 am Reply

    I got the inspiration of this story from your Junaid’s story… this is the other version of the coin.. hope it complements the part that how one’s religious (although crooked) version of Jihad, actually ends up killing innocents from the same clan. Religion does not tell us to kill – it is the maligned manifestation which blurs the vision and ceases the ability to think rationally, which drives people to be insane and insensitive. thank you for spending time here!

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  3. soumyav July 9, 2012 at 6:04 pm Reply

    the innocence getting influenced by the black thoughts of selfish people using each innocent mind for their own need and motives

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  4. Khalid Raza November 9, 2012 at 6:59 am Reply

    Very well articulated Soumyav

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